Treeline - Erin Lally

Erin Lally '09

 

 

A 2009 SUNY Potsdam Graduate, Erin majored in Creative Writing and minored in Asian Studies.  Currently, she is teaching English in South Korea.

 

 

 

   Kwantung

 

   The mushi1 struggles
   to escape Imperial
   obi2. How foolish,

   the wind rustles a
   maple and a Night Hawk3, who
   is choking on  a

   water sleeve4, colored
   a deep shade of burgundy.
   Into her ear the

   mushi crawled and felt
   the vibrations of panic,
   lulled to peaceful sleep.

   A sokai5 boy lies
   in wait for Momotaro6
   to bring him back home

   and celebrate his
   victory with honami,7
   sakura8 petals

   falling like raindrops
   on the Emperor’s Palace
   in the midsummer day.

   The mushi crawls out
   from hibernation to glimpse
   at a bright future.


1. Mushi - Pronounced Moo-shee. Japanese for insect.
2. Obi - Pronunced Oh-bee. The sash on a formal Japanese robe called a Kimono.
3. Night Hawk - Term for middle age Japanese prostitutes who conducted their services at night on the streets in 19th century Japan.
4. Water Sleeve - an elongated sleeve used to emphasize movement in Han Chinese traditional dancing.
5. Sokai - Pronounced So-kah-ee. Japanese schoolboys who were sent out to the country so they would be safe from air raids in the cities during wartime Japan in early 20th century.
6. Momotaro - Pronounced Moh-moh-tah-roh. A folk story character turned into an animation, who was a small boy with a strong sense of independence and patriotism, promoted nationalism during wartime Japan.
7. Honami - Pronounced Hoh-nah-mee. Cherry blossom viewing. In Early springtime, the cherry blossom trees are in bloom and the petals of the flowers are falling.
8. Sakura - Pronounced Sah-koo-rah. Japanese for cherry blossom.